Wednesday, March 17, 2010

nature's slinky


streams swiftly rushing
by sun bathed, mud covered banks-
fresh aired spring has sprung!

5 comments:

Smorg said...

That's so cute, Betmo! :oD Nest-building time, ay?

TomCat said...

Awww.. It's eating dirt, just like a Republican! :-)

Georg said...

Bonjour Betmo,

If you feel like it, please explain why you have placed "by" on the second line.

Georg

betmo said...

only because of the spacing- it was one of those spur of the moment posts- so, it was what i came up with- ideally,

streams rushing by sun bathed, mud covered banks....

but haiku is 5-7-5 meter- so, that's the only reason :)

Georg said...

Bonjour Betmo, When you get tired of knitting and etsying, what about a new Haiku?

Come back to life!

Georg